My first story! YAY! If you saw my last post you know that I don't know what I am going to call this one so you guys can post ideas once its finished! I hope you like it!
"It's going to be okay!' I said to my little sister. You see we were in a orphanage and Mrs.Mordar was NOT the nicest person. She had us have what we "thought" was oatmeal for breakfast, lunch and dinner until today when she gave us... NOTHING! She said "If you don't do all the chores you don't even get a scrap of food" of course we knew she wasn't kidding so we all got our chores done... except for my little sister Norah who was sick. She was seriously sick. She was throwing up and well, her fever went up to 105 degrees! and even though Norah was sick Mrs.Mordar didn't care and she gave us all nothing to eat. Right now Norah was crying because she was hungry and was really sick. I was trying to tell her that it was all going to be okay, but mostly I was just telling myself.
Everyone in the orphanage was crying, even me. We were all starving and not trying to think about all the work we had to do. We have to pick up all the puke (from Norah), make the beds, dust the doorknobs, sweep and vacuum the whole orphanage, wash the dishes, and the worst part... picking up all the dead mice that snowy, the cat kills. We were all trying to sleep but we knew no one could so I, said "lets go get food in the kitchen! Nobody will know!" Everyone thought it was a great idea so I went downstairs alone and went straight to the kitchen, nobody was there so I went in and went right to the pantry. There was enough food to feed 10,000 people! When I was about to grab the crackers someone opened the door! It was...
continued tomorrow!
Can't wait to see who it is tomorrow. Good startt to your story.
ReplyDeleteOh no! You've left me hanging! Was it Mrs. Mordor or a new character? I'll be back tomorrow to find out!
ReplyDeleteHi this is Sophie Bricker I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. maybe it is Mis.Mordar??????????……….
ReplyDeleteSofie Sofie Sofie, Your story is stupendous!!!And i can't wait to find out who it is!!!!!Your mother must be so proud!
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I'll post the next part soon!
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