Last time...
Once we were at school I was really upset. My friends started making fun of people again. I was so upset that I was going to tell them not to make fun of people but...
This time on...
Just then Mindy squealed and said, "Look how that girl Anna is so into her book about that fake stupid dragon!" Next I answered "It is normal to believe in that dragon around here! And anyway, It is not stupid! That picture on the cover could be real. My great grampa took that so I am starting to believe it." "Mindy and the Pop stars looked at me like I had 4 head and then Mindy said "Go, I don't ever want to see your face again!" "Well that was harsh." I thought. I walked away and then asked the girl Anna if I could sit with her. She looked surprised. She said "What about you and the pop stars thinking I'm weird?". I answered "I am not a pop star anymore. They think I am weird too now. You are not weird though. Just because you believe in the dragon does not mean you are weird. I believe in it too." Her face turned pale. I guess she didn't want people knowing that she believed in the dragon.
It wasn't very Hard leaving he pop stars. I didn't have to worry about gossip and boys. All I had to worry about was the dragon. Only the dragon. And maybe my new friend Anna. Apparently she was pretty cool! She had 5 sisters and 3 brothers and lived with her mom because sadly her dad died when she was 2 from a heart attack. It was such a sad story. In school it turns out that we had almost all the same classes and I just didn't notice! I was so happy.
Sunday, April 29, 2012
Tuesday, April 24, 2012
Second story part 2
Last time on...
It was hard to sleep with my head spinning around and around with a ton of different thoughts but eventually I fell asleep.
This time...
When I woke up in the morning to my alarm clock I was upset. I was upset because I was worried that my friends would make fun of me. I know they are friends so they shouldn't but I don't want them thinking I am nerdy so then they will kick me out of the group we have together (that I started). We call our group "The Pop stars". We always thought we were better than everyone else till yesterday when I realized that even people who believed different were still people.
When I finally got down to breakfast my dad was sitting there waiting for me with my favorite breakfast meal. Waffles with syrup and blueberries! At least there was one thing that made me happy at the moment. Before I even took a bite of my waffles my friend (Who was in the pop stars group) barged in and said, "The bus in here! We gotta go! We need time to get the front seat on the bus and get our makeup finished!" "No! What about breakfast?" I said. "What about the pop stars? Come on!" she said. I grunted and then got up from the table and followed my friend Mindy to the bus.
Once we were at school I was really upset. My friends started making fun of people again. I was so upset that I was going to tell them not to make fun of people but...
It was hard to sleep with my head spinning around and around with a ton of different thoughts but eventually I fell asleep.
This time...
When I woke up in the morning to my alarm clock I was upset. I was upset because I was worried that my friends would make fun of me. I know they are friends so they shouldn't but I don't want them thinking I am nerdy so then they will kick me out of the group we have together (that I started). We call our group "The Pop stars". We always thought we were better than everyone else till yesterday when I realized that even people who believed different were still people.
When I finally got down to breakfast my dad was sitting there waiting for me with my favorite breakfast meal. Waffles with syrup and blueberries! At least there was one thing that made me happy at the moment. Before I even took a bite of my waffles my friend (Who was in the pop stars group) barged in and said, "The bus in here! We gotta go! We need time to get the front seat on the bus and get our makeup finished!" "No! What about breakfast?" I said. "What about the pop stars? Come on!" she said. I grunted and then got up from the table and followed my friend Mindy to the bus.
Once we were at school I was really upset. My friends started making fun of people again. I was so upset that I was going to tell them not to make fun of people but...
Monday, April 23, 2012
My second story
This is the beginning of my second story! I hope you like it! This one doesn't have a name yet either... But you can post comments!
In 1902 Alex Bloom was in all the most famous news papers and magazines in Alaska. He was interviewed by Alaska's most famous news show called "Good Morning America". I know it is for all of America but the show got most of its viewers from Nome, Alaska. He was in it because he had pictures of a mysterious ice dragon. Everyone thought it was a myth before that. It wasn't till 1908 when people stopped believing. I, Vanessa Bloom had never believed in that story until today. Yes, I am the great granddaughter of Alex Bloom but it didn't mean I had to believe what my Great Grandfather said. Well anyway, My Dad was telling me his usual story of the night, at dinner and his story was of course, about the ice dragon. My parents are divorced and I live with my dad in Nome Alaska (where the dragon was spotted) so we were alone and my mom couldn't protest about my dad telling me silly stories that were just going to make me worry. My dad told me stories about the dragon every night but tonight it was different. Tonight he actually showed me the pictures. They were so realistic, and they couldn't of been photoshopped back then! After that I believed. I was afraid to tell my friends that I believed because they made fun of the nerdy kids who do lots of research on the dragon, and I was afraid to tell my mom because she would flip out and force me to tell her that it wasn't real, but I wouldn't be able to do it! It was hard to sleep with my head spinning around and around with a ton of different thoughts but eventually I fell asleep.
I hope you guys like the start to my new story!
In 1902 Alex Bloom was in all the most famous news papers and magazines in Alaska. He was interviewed by Alaska's most famous news show called "Good Morning America". I know it is for all of America but the show got most of its viewers from Nome, Alaska. He was in it because he had pictures of a mysterious ice dragon. Everyone thought it was a myth before that. It wasn't till 1908 when people stopped believing. I, Vanessa Bloom had never believed in that story until today. Yes, I am the great granddaughter of Alex Bloom but it didn't mean I had to believe what my Great Grandfather said. Well anyway, My Dad was telling me his usual story of the night, at dinner and his story was of course, about the ice dragon. My parents are divorced and I live with my dad in Nome Alaska (where the dragon was spotted) so we were alone and my mom couldn't protest about my dad telling me silly stories that were just going to make me worry. My dad told me stories about the dragon every night but tonight it was different. Tonight he actually showed me the pictures. They were so realistic, and they couldn't of been photoshopped back then! After that I believed. I was afraid to tell my friends that I believed because they made fun of the nerdy kids who do lots of research on the dragon, and I was afraid to tell my mom because she would flip out and force me to tell her that it wasn't real, but I wouldn't be able to do it! It was hard to sleep with my head spinning around and around with a ton of different thoughts but eventually I fell asleep.
I hope you guys like the start to my new story!
I found a title!
I found a title for my last story! My mom posted the idea. It is called "Happy Endings" Do you like it? I think it is a great title. My next story is called... Ok I admit I don't know about this one either :( Just post comments about the title as I go! :) I will post the second story in like 20 to 30 minutes!
Sunday, April 22, 2012
Epilogue to _______
I still don't know what this one is called but here is the...
Epilogue
Five years after all the children got adopted, they all had a very happy family. They went on a few vacations to Hawaii and New york all together.They had a very happy life. One Christmas they got a family dog named Sunny, and a cat named Cindy. They all loved each other so much.It is the end! I will start a new story tomorrow! (I hope! It might be hard with school though!)
Still comment names for the story!
Saturday, April 21, 2012
Comments
Anybody can post an idea for a story name! I have no idea what I am gong to call it. Keep posting!
Friday, April 20, 2012
first story last part!
Last time on _________...
So we both left the bathroom, went through our closets, and hopped in bed. A few minutes later Sarah (or should I call Mom) walked into my room and said, "Goodnight honey! Have a great nights sleep!" Then she switched out the gas lamps and left. Around twenty minutes later I fell asleep.
When Mom finally noticed me she said "Oh hello Alexa! Are you almost ready for breakfast? We are having Mexican omelets with tomatoes and peppers, bacon, sausage, pancakes, and french toast. Does that sound alright?" "That sounds delicious. anything that I could do to help?" I said. "No Honey. But something fun to do is go down to the library and read while you are waiting!" she answered. So next thing I knew I was in the library reading a book about a girl who got captured by pirates, but one of the pirates sons fall in love with the girl and they secretly leave letters to each other behind a barrel filled with oil. I was so into the book that I didn't even notice when Mom called me for breakfast. she walked into the library and said "I know that is a great book but you got to have breakfast!" So I folded my page, and went into the dining room for breakfast. While we were eating we were talking about how we would have to put 56 kids on 5 busses! I was still shocked about all those kids living in one house.
Once breakfast was over we got 3 Chauffeurs to drive a bus and then David and Sarah drove the other 2.
I got into the car with Mom and Norah got into the car with Dad. The ride was wonderful! The buss had 20 seats. That is a lot! when we got to Mordar's orphanage Mom and Dad got out of the car and said "We would like to adopt all the kids." to Mrs.Mordar. You should of seen the look of her face! She said " You can not do that!" Yes we can, we checked with a judge just in case before we left. we have 90,000 dollars."Dad said calmly. Next Mrs.Mordar said to all the kids "Get into groups of ten and leave one at a time to get in a bus. You are getting adopted!" I heard so many screams of joy come from the inside of the house. First an older group came out, Then a group of toddlers came out, Next girls my age, fourth was a group of girls Norah's age, then finally there was a group of 6 year olds. Once everyone was in the mansion they were all squealing with gladness. After that, Everything was perfect.
Its done! Did you like it? Try to think of what it should be called and post comments about it! :D thanks for reading my first story!
So we both left the bathroom, went through our closets, and hopped in bed. A few minutes later Sarah (or should I call Mom) walked into my room and said, "Goodnight honey! Have a great nights sleep!" Then she switched out the gas lamps and left. Around twenty minutes later I fell asleep.
This time on ________...
When I woke up in the morning I forgot that I was in a mansion. It took me a minute to figure out where I was and once I did a big smile spread across my face. I remembered "Today was the day that Mom and Dad would adopt all 56 kids (because me and Norah were already adopted) and we would ride busses! Yesterday was my first time riding a car! It is such a big jump to go on a bus next! I quickly got up in my pajamas and ran down to the living room. Dad was in there wearing his suit (that he normally wore) and he said "Hi Alexa, did you get a good nights sleep?" I answered by saying "Yes, I hard a great sleep. You?" Next he said "I did. Thank you for asking! You are such a polite girl." I blushed and then asked "Where is Mom?" "In the kitchen making breakfast, since she is such a great cook!" He answered. So, I ran through a hallway with green walls, then through the dining room, through the pantry, and into the kitchen. It was really hard remembering where every room was but I remembered how to get to the kitchen because I knew that Mom would be there a lot. when I waked in I smelt a wonderful smell. It was a mix of bacon, sausage, eggs, pancakes, and french toast. I couldn't believe that Mom cooked this already and it was only 8:00 A.M. She would of had to get up at 5:00 A.M. or something!When Mom finally noticed me she said "Oh hello Alexa! Are you almost ready for breakfast? We are having Mexican omelets with tomatoes and peppers, bacon, sausage, pancakes, and french toast. Does that sound alright?" "That sounds delicious. anything that I could do to help?" I said. "No Honey. But something fun to do is go down to the library and read while you are waiting!" she answered. So next thing I knew I was in the library reading a book about a girl who got captured by pirates, but one of the pirates sons fall in love with the girl and they secretly leave letters to each other behind a barrel filled with oil. I was so into the book that I didn't even notice when Mom called me for breakfast. she walked into the library and said "I know that is a great book but you got to have breakfast!" So I folded my page, and went into the dining room for breakfast. While we were eating we were talking about how we would have to put 56 kids on 5 busses! I was still shocked about all those kids living in one house.
Once breakfast was over we got 3 Chauffeurs to drive a bus and then David and Sarah drove the other 2.
I got into the car with Mom and Norah got into the car with Dad. The ride was wonderful! The buss had 20 seats. That is a lot! when we got to Mordar's orphanage Mom and Dad got out of the car and said "We would like to adopt all the kids." to Mrs.Mordar. You should of seen the look of her face! She said " You can not do that!" Yes we can, we checked with a judge just in case before we left. we have 90,000 dollars."Dad said calmly. Next Mrs.Mordar said to all the kids "Get into groups of ten and leave one at a time to get in a bus. You are getting adopted!" I heard so many screams of joy come from the inside of the house. First an older group came out, Then a group of toddlers came out, Next girls my age, fourth was a group of girls Norah's age, then finally there was a group of 6 year olds. Once everyone was in the mansion they were all squealing with gladness. After that, Everything was perfect.
Its done! Did you like it? Try to think of what it should be called and post comments about it! :D thanks for reading my first story!
Thursday, April 19, 2012
First story eighth part
Last time on _______...
What is your favorite color?" Now I could answer this one myself. I answered "My favorite color is royal purple." Next she ran off to find a dress and she came back with a beautiful dress. It was royal purple, it had lace cuffs and a lace hem. It was the most wonderful dress that I had ever seen. I said "It is perfect! Best dress ever!" So we bought the dress and went home.
This time on _______...
When we got home it was 10:00 at night! I didn't think shopping for one dress would take 5 hours! I was very tired so I went upstairs in the left wing where Sarah told me my bedroom was. There was one door that had wood carvings with very many details. There were lions and dragons and a little kitty cat in each corner. In the middle there was a name carved into it. I looked closely and it said "Alexa Maria Panaterii" I was amazed at the beautiful lettering. I was excited to see the inside so I opened the door and It was purple. A royal purple colorI wondered how they knew! They must of gotten the wall paper on before the dress shop! Maybe they found the little sheet of paper I wrote about myself. It would make since if Sarah read it because I wrote it while I was sitting next to the kitchen door and I left it there so she probably could of seen it. It had a blue flower design on the quilt on top of the bed and purple sheets underneath. I jumped on and I realized, it was a waterbed! It felt like I was floating when I was lying on it! It felt so nice! Next I looked in the closet. It was half the size of my room! it had at least 30 dresses in it! They were every color of the rainbow. Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo, and Violet. I was so curious about the room, that I went to they way back of the closet to see if there was more, an there was! There was a door that said shared bathroom with Norah Elisabeth Panaterii. I was thinking "Whoa! Norah and I have our own bathroom!" When I opened the door Norah was in there with her mouth hanging wide open while she was looking at the counter which had makeup, nail polish, and all different kinds of soaps and shampoos. She Said "This is awesome!" I said the same thing at the same time so we both laughed. Next I said "Well, It is late so we should get to sleep" So we both left the bathroom, went through our closets, and hopped in bed. A few minutes later Sarah (or should I call Mom) walked into my room and said, "Goodnight honey! Have a great nights sleep!" Then she switched out the gas lamps and left. Around twenty minutes later I fell asleep.
I am so excited! Tomorrow the story is probably going to be finished! =D
I am so excited! Tomorrow the story is probably going to be finished! =D
Wednesday, April 18, 2012
First story seventh part
Last time on __________...
When we went inside they started telling me about everything, including why she said she was Miss.Manzoni. She said it because...
This time on ________...
She was Miss.Manzoni! She got married to a rich guy named David Panaterii and left her job as a cook. Now she lives in a big mansion with David. By now I was calmed down and I actually understood why everything happened this way. Mrs.Manzoni adopted us because she had to help Norah feel better but she had to keep us together. It all made sense! Well, everything except what Sarah just said. She said she would try to adopt ALL the kids in the orphanage! I didn't get it! How would she do it! I mean I know she had the room and the money, but how would she take care of all those kids 58! I asked her "How are you going to take care of 58 kids?" Sarah answered by saying "Well, I will take care of 8 kids, and I will have 5 nannies that each take care of 10 kids each. We would all eat dinner together though because we would still all be a family." I was so happy! all my friends wouldn't be stuck at the orphanage without me! They would live with me! In the same house too! We would all be sisters! I couldn't wait till all of them were adopted! I was really curious about when they were getting adopted and how much money it would be so I asked "When are you adopting all of them?" Her answer was "Well tomorrow We are taking 5 busses to the orphanage and adopting every single little girl there is. It will cost $90.000 to get all of them out and 100,000 for the busses. "Wow" I said "weren't busses just tested and made in a factory in Canada?" "Yes" Sarah answered "You see David worked at a car factory and he gets the cars before they are even on sale!" Norah's mouth started to hang open in amazement. I guess she didn't even know about the busses!
Later that afternoon I got into nice new clothes and shoes. They were so soft and warm. I never guessed that nice clothes were so comfortable! I guess a normal rich 10 year old wears makeup because thats what they put on me. Not a lot but just some blush and lipstick. I felt like the happiest girl in the world! After I was all dressed up we took the car to the town to get some new clothes for me. When we got there we went into a store with a beautiful pink dress on display in the window. Inside a lady measured me, and asked me all these questions I didn't know the answer to, like "what's your favorite style of dress?" and "Lots of lace or no lace?' I didn't know the answers to these silly questions so I looked at Sarah for help. She said "She likes Calico dresses and only a little lace." I lipped thank you to Sara and then looked back at the lady who was asking me questions. Next she said "What is your favorite color?" Now I could answer this one myself. I answered "My favorite color is royal purple." Next she ran off to find a dress and she came back with a beautiful dress. It was royal purple, it had lace cuffs and a lace hem. It was the most wonderful dress that I had ever seen. I said "It is perfect! Best dress ever!" So we bought the dress and went home.
read next time!:)
When we went inside they started telling me about everything, including why she said she was Miss.Manzoni. She said it because...
This time on ________...
She was Miss.Manzoni! She got married to a rich guy named David Panaterii and left her job as a cook. Now she lives in a big mansion with David. By now I was calmed down and I actually understood why everything happened this way. Mrs.Manzoni adopted us because she had to help Norah feel better but she had to keep us together. It all made sense! Well, everything except what Sarah just said. She said she would try to adopt ALL the kids in the orphanage! I didn't get it! How would she do it! I mean I know she had the room and the money, but how would she take care of all those kids 58! I asked her "How are you going to take care of 58 kids?" Sarah answered by saying "Well, I will take care of 8 kids, and I will have 5 nannies that each take care of 10 kids each. We would all eat dinner together though because we would still all be a family." I was so happy! all my friends wouldn't be stuck at the orphanage without me! They would live with me! In the same house too! We would all be sisters! I couldn't wait till all of them were adopted! I was really curious about when they were getting adopted and how much money it would be so I asked "When are you adopting all of them?" Her answer was "Well tomorrow We are taking 5 busses to the orphanage and adopting every single little girl there is. It will cost $90.000 to get all of them out and 100,000 for the busses. "Wow" I said "weren't busses just tested and made in a factory in Canada?" "Yes" Sarah answered "You see David worked at a car factory and he gets the cars before they are even on sale!" Norah's mouth started to hang open in amazement. I guess she didn't even know about the busses!
Later that afternoon I got into nice new clothes and shoes. They were so soft and warm. I never guessed that nice clothes were so comfortable! I guess a normal rich 10 year old wears makeup because thats what they put on me. Not a lot but just some blush and lipstick. I felt like the happiest girl in the world! After I was all dressed up we took the car to the town to get some new clothes for me. When we got there we went into a store with a beautiful pink dress on display in the window. Inside a lady measured me, and asked me all these questions I didn't know the answer to, like "what's your favorite style of dress?" and "Lots of lace or no lace?' I didn't know the answers to these silly questions so I looked at Sarah for help. She said "She likes Calico dresses and only a little lace." I lipped thank you to Sara and then looked back at the lady who was asking me questions. Next she said "What is your favorite color?" Now I could answer this one myself. I answered "My favorite color is royal purple." Next she ran off to find a dress and she came back with a beautiful dress. It was royal purple, it had lace cuffs and a lace hem. It was the most wonderful dress that I had ever seen. I said "It is perfect! Best dress ever!" So we bought the dress and went home.
read next time!:)
Tuesday, April 17, 2012
first story sixth part
last time on _______...
I was so happy I didn't even notice how much Sarah Panaterii looked like the old cook Miss.Manzoni. I was so happy I ran into Sarah's arms an said "Thank you for adopting me!"
This time on ___________...
Sarah answered "I knew I had to keep you two sisters together!" I was starting to get really confused. The first reason I was confused was that I was wondering how she new that we were sisters, and the second reason was that she sounded just like Miss.Manzoni! She even had the same smile! Once we were in the car I said "are you related to Miss.Manzoni by any chance?" Sarah's face lit up and then she said "Yes, I am really close with her!" Next I said "Was she your sister?" She answered by saying "I am Miss.Manzoni." I was starting to get really freaked out so I just looked at Norah hoping for her face to be confused like mine but she looked perfectly fine! In fact she started to giggle, and I know she giggles when she has a secret. I was getting REALLY confused now. I know Sarah or as she says she is, Miss.Mansoni and my sister were keeping secrets from me and I felt like I needed to figure them out or I would faint! Finally Norah said "We will explain when we get to the house.
After what seemed like an hour we pulled into the driveway of a huge mansion. At first I thought we were just dropping something off until I saw a man run out of the house saying "Sarah! You are finally home! I can finally see my new child!" I started getting really upset. I didn't want to be this random guys child. Even if I lived in a mansion with my sister! My eyes started tearing up. I wanted my old family back from before the orphanage I wanted my friends from the orphanage with me! Once the man (supposedly my new father) saw my tears he said, "I know it's different here but it is all going to be okay!" I shouted "NO! IT'S NOT! I WANT MY REAL MOM AND DAD!" I know I wasn't being very nice but I couldn't help it. It was hard being adopted by some random people you don't know. when we went inside they started telling me about everything, including why she said she was Miss.Manzoni. She said it because...
Read next time to figure it out!
:)
I was so happy I didn't even notice how much Sarah Panaterii looked like the old cook Miss.Manzoni. I was so happy I ran into Sarah's arms an said "Thank you for adopting me!"
This time on ___________...
Sarah answered "I knew I had to keep you two sisters together!" I was starting to get really confused. The first reason I was confused was that I was wondering how she new that we were sisters, and the second reason was that she sounded just like Miss.Manzoni! She even had the same smile! Once we were in the car I said "are you related to Miss.Manzoni by any chance?" Sarah's face lit up and then she said "Yes, I am really close with her!" Next I said "Was she your sister?" She answered by saying "I am Miss.Manzoni." I was starting to get really freaked out so I just looked at Norah hoping for her face to be confused like mine but she looked perfectly fine! In fact she started to giggle, and I know she giggles when she has a secret. I was getting REALLY confused now. I know Sarah or as she says she is, Miss.Mansoni and my sister were keeping secrets from me and I felt like I needed to figure them out or I would faint! Finally Norah said "We will explain when we get to the house.
After what seemed like an hour we pulled into the driveway of a huge mansion. At first I thought we were just dropping something off until I saw a man run out of the house saying "Sarah! You are finally home! I can finally see my new child!" I started getting really upset. I didn't want to be this random guys child. Even if I lived in a mansion with my sister! My eyes started tearing up. I wanted my old family back from before the orphanage I wanted my friends from the orphanage with me! Once the man (supposedly my new father) saw my tears he said, "I know it's different here but it is all going to be okay!" I shouted "NO! IT'S NOT! I WANT MY REAL MOM AND DAD!" I know I wasn't being very nice but I couldn't help it. It was hard being adopted by some random people you don't know. when we went inside they started telling me about everything, including why she said she was Miss.Manzoni. She said it because...
Read next time to figure it out!
:)
Monday, April 16, 2012
First story fifth part
Last time on ______
Right when I was about to ask the new cook where Miss.Manzoni was my sister Norah got called by Mrs.Mordar and she said "your getting adopted by..."
This time on ______
"someone named Sarah Panatarii" I almost screamed I was so upset. I couldn't just let my sister be taken away by a random lady named Sarah. Norah had tears in her eyes and she screamed "Don't take me away! NO!!" I looked out the open door and through the tears in my eye I noticed that the woman looked strangely familiar. She winked and me, took Norah's hand, and got into her car. I ran up to my bed and threw my face into my pillow. I thought of how mean Mrs.Mordar was to let me and Norah get split up. I mean, Why would she do that! When I was thinking about how mean she was I fell asleep. In the morning the next day I woke up to the most terrible noise
I wanted to hear. Mrs.Mordar. She was saying something that I would never expect her to say though. She said "Your getting adopted by Sarah Panaterii so get up! At first I thought I
was dreaming but then I realized it was real! I was really getting adopted and living in a house with my sister! I ran downstairs and saw my sister dressed in a calico dress and a petty coat. She looked much better than me with my unbrushed hair and ripped clothes. I realized that I would soon have a petty coat and a calico dress on. I was so happy I didn't even notice how much Sarah Panaterii looked like the old cook Miss.Manzoni. I was so happy I ran into Sarah's arms an said "Thank you for adopting me!"
Read next time!
Right when I was about to ask the new cook where Miss.Manzoni was my sister Norah got called by Mrs.Mordar and she said "your getting adopted by..."
This time on ______
"someone named Sarah Panatarii" I almost screamed I was so upset. I couldn't just let my sister be taken away by a random lady named Sarah. Norah had tears in her eyes and she screamed "Don't take me away! NO!!" I looked out the open door and through the tears in my eye I noticed that the woman looked strangely familiar. She winked and me, took Norah's hand, and got into her car. I ran up to my bed and threw my face into my pillow. I thought of how mean Mrs.Mordar was to let me and Norah get split up. I mean, Why would she do that! When I was thinking about how mean she was I fell asleep. In the morning the next day I woke up to the most terrible noise
I wanted to hear. Mrs.Mordar. She was saying something that I would never expect her to say though. She said "Your getting adopted by Sarah Panaterii so get up! At first I thought I
was dreaming but then I realized it was real! I was really getting adopted and living in a house with my sister! I ran downstairs and saw my sister dressed in a calico dress and a petty coat. She looked much better than me with my unbrushed hair and ripped clothes. I realized that I would soon have a petty coat and a calico dress on. I was so happy I didn't even notice how much Sarah Panaterii looked like the old cook Miss.Manzoni. I was so happy I ran into Sarah's arms an said "Thank you for adopting me!"
Read next time!
Sunday, April 15, 2012
First story fourth part
Last time on ________...
Next Miss.Manzoni said "I better get downstairs before Mrs.Mordar wakes you up!
This time on _________...
Once she was gone everyone ate more and then they went to sleep.
When we all woke up all we heard was Mrs.Mordar shouting "Get up you twirps and work!" We all got up including Norah and she looked perfectly fine. We first dusted the doorknobs, vacuumed and mopped all the floors, made food for Mrs.Mordar,
And made the beds. After we got our "oatmeal" we all snuck into the kitchen and thought that Miss.Manzoni would be there but it was a new cook named Patricia. Right when I was about to ask the new cook where Miss.Manzoni was my sister Norah got called by Mrs.Mordar and she said "your getting adopted by..."
You will figure it out next time! Read it tomorrow!
Next Miss.Manzoni said "I better get downstairs before Mrs.Mordar wakes you up!
This time on _________...
Once she was gone everyone ate more and then they went to sleep.
When we all woke up all we heard was Mrs.Mordar shouting "Get up you twirps and work!" We all got up including Norah and she looked perfectly fine. We first dusted the doorknobs, vacuumed and mopped all the floors, made food for Mrs.Mordar,
And made the beds. After we got our "oatmeal" we all snuck into the kitchen and thought that Miss.Manzoni would be there but it was a new cook named Patricia. Right when I was about to ask the new cook where Miss.Manzoni was my sister Norah got called by Mrs.Mordar and she said "your getting adopted by..."
You will figure it out next time! Read it tomorrow!
Saturday, April 14, 2012
First story third part
Last time on _______
I felt relieved and I said "I am going to sneak back but later can you bring up some crackers or something?" she answered by saying "of coarse" then I snuck back upstairs.
This time on _______
When I got there everyone started asking where the food was. My answer was "The cook is bringing some later."
They all looked at me in shock. One said "Miss.Manzoni? I thought she was mean!" I answered by saying "Me too
But I guess not if she is bringing us food!" Then I heard thumping in the hall, I thought it was Miss.Manzoni till the person walked in. It was Mrs.Mordar! She said "Why are the lights on? Why are you talking, And why are you out of bed Alexa Maria Morab?" I'm Alexa Maria Morab,
so my answer was " I was stretching" I know it wasn't very believable but I didn't have much time. Mrs.Mordar said "Everyone go to bed!", then she switched off the lights and stormed off.
Then a few minutes later Miss.Manzoni came in with 3 hole platters of food! There was a pot of pasta, bread, pancakes, tacos and even more! Everyone was really happy even Norah. They all swarmed around Miss.Manzoni while she handed out food. Once everyone got food Miss.Manzoni saw Norah and said "Oh my goodness! You look like you feel terrible!" Norah moaned and then I said "Her fever went up to 105.6 degrees!" Miss.Manzoni looked worried and then she ran out of the room and when she came back she had medicine had she said "Norah take this!" hen Norah took it and her face looked like you just stuffed a sour lemon in her mouth but after a few minutes she looked much better.
Next Miss.Manzoni said "I better get downstairs before Mrs.Mordar wakes you up!
I hope you like it so far!
I felt relieved and I said "I am going to sneak back but later can you bring up some crackers or something?" she answered by saying "of coarse" then I snuck back upstairs.
This time on _______
When I got there everyone started asking where the food was. My answer was "The cook is bringing some later."
They all looked at me in shock. One said "Miss.Manzoni? I thought she was mean!" I answered by saying "Me too
But I guess not if she is bringing us food!" Then I heard thumping in the hall, I thought it was Miss.Manzoni till the person walked in. It was Mrs.Mordar! She said "Why are the lights on? Why are you talking, And why are you out of bed Alexa Maria Morab?" I'm Alexa Maria Morab,
so my answer was " I was stretching" I know it wasn't very believable but I didn't have much time. Mrs.Mordar said "Everyone go to bed!", then she switched off the lights and stormed off.
Then a few minutes later Miss.Manzoni came in with 3 hole platters of food! There was a pot of pasta, bread, pancakes, tacos and even more! Everyone was really happy even Norah. They all swarmed around Miss.Manzoni while she handed out food. Once everyone got food Miss.Manzoni saw Norah and said "Oh my goodness! You look like you feel terrible!" Norah moaned and then I said "Her fever went up to 105.6 degrees!" Miss.Manzoni looked worried and then she ran out of the room and when she came back she had medicine had she said "Norah take this!" hen Norah took it and her face looked like you just stuffed a sour lemon in her mouth but after a few minutes she looked much better.
Next Miss.Manzoni said "I better get downstairs before Mrs.Mordar wakes you up!
I hope you like it so far!
Friday, April 13, 2012
First story second part
Yay!! So many people have look at this website! Everyone who has tell others about it!
Last time in whatever we're going to call this story
I went downstairs alone and went straight to the kitchen, nobody was there so I went in and went right to the pantry. There was enough food to feed 10,000 people! When I was about to grab the crackers someone opened the door! It was...
This time on ________....
The cook, Miss.Manzoni! I was so scared so I climbed into the cabinet as quick as a could without the cook seeing me and I started crying again.
I was so scared. I didn't know what was going to happen or of Miss.Manzoni was going to see me. I never had met the cook, and I was expecting her to be mean because she worked for
Mrs.Mordar and Mrs.Mordar is not nice at all like I said before.
Since I was crying so much I put my face into my hands but right when I did that the cabinet opened! Miss.Manzoni was there looking at me and she said "Oh my goodness how did you get here!" and I answered "I'm so sorry please don't tell Mrs.Mordar!" the cook looked at me in a funny way and said "why would I tell her she is not nice at all!" I felt relieved and I said "I am going to sneak back but later can you bring up some crackers or something?" she answered by saying "of coarse" then I snuck back upstairs.
Okay guys! You will hopefully hear more tomorrow! :)
Last time in whatever we're going to call this story
I went downstairs alone and went straight to the kitchen, nobody was there so I went in and went right to the pantry. There was enough food to feed 10,000 people! When I was about to grab the crackers someone opened the door! It was...
This time on ________....
The cook, Miss.Manzoni! I was so scared so I climbed into the cabinet as quick as a could without the cook seeing me and I started crying again.
I was so scared. I didn't know what was going to happen or of Miss.Manzoni was going to see me. I never had met the cook, and I was expecting her to be mean because she worked for
Mrs.Mordar and Mrs.Mordar is not nice at all like I said before.
Since I was crying so much I put my face into my hands but right when I did that the cabinet opened! Miss.Manzoni was there looking at me and she said "Oh my goodness how did you get here!" and I answered "I'm so sorry please don't tell Mrs.Mordar!" the cook looked at me in a funny way and said "why would I tell her she is not nice at all!" I felt relieved and I said "I am going to sneak back but later can you bring up some crackers or something?" she answered by saying "of coarse" then I snuck back upstairs.
Okay guys! You will hopefully hear more tomorrow! :)
Thursday, April 12, 2012
FIRST STORY!!!
My first story! YAY! If you saw my last post you know that I don't know what I am going to call this one so you guys can post ideas once its finished! I hope you like it!
"It's going to be okay!' I said to my little sister. You see we were in a orphanage and Mrs.Mordar was NOT the nicest person. She had us have what we "thought" was oatmeal for breakfast, lunch and dinner until today when she gave us... NOTHING! She said "If you don't do all the chores you don't even get a scrap of food" of course we knew she wasn't kidding so we all got our chores done... except for my little sister Norah who was sick. She was seriously sick. She was throwing up and well, her fever went up to 105 degrees! and even though Norah was sick Mrs.Mordar didn't care and she gave us all nothing to eat. Right now Norah was crying because she was hungry and was really sick. I was trying to tell her that it was all going to be okay, but mostly I was just telling myself.
Everyone in the orphanage was crying, even me. We were all starving and not trying to think about all the work we had to do. We have to pick up all the puke (from Norah), make the beds, dust the doorknobs, sweep and vacuum the whole orphanage, wash the dishes, and the worst part... picking up all the dead mice that snowy, the cat kills. We were all trying to sleep but we knew no one could so I, said "lets go get food in the kitchen! Nobody will know!" Everyone thought it was a great idea so I went downstairs alone and went straight to the kitchen, nobody was there so I went in and went right to the pantry. There was enough food to feed 10,000 people! When I was about to grab the crackers someone opened the door! It was...
continued tomorrow!
"It's going to be okay!' I said to my little sister. You see we were in a orphanage and Mrs.Mordar was NOT the nicest person. She had us have what we "thought" was oatmeal for breakfast, lunch and dinner until today when she gave us... NOTHING! She said "If you don't do all the chores you don't even get a scrap of food" of course we knew she wasn't kidding so we all got our chores done... except for my little sister Norah who was sick. She was seriously sick. She was throwing up and well, her fever went up to 105 degrees! and even though Norah was sick Mrs.Mordar didn't care and she gave us all nothing to eat. Right now Norah was crying because she was hungry and was really sick. I was trying to tell her that it was all going to be okay, but mostly I was just telling myself.
Everyone in the orphanage was crying, even me. We were all starving and not trying to think about all the work we had to do. We have to pick up all the puke (from Norah), make the beds, dust the doorknobs, sweep and vacuum the whole orphanage, wash the dishes, and the worst part... picking up all the dead mice that snowy, the cat kills. We were all trying to sleep but we knew no one could so I, said "lets go get food in the kitchen! Nobody will know!" Everyone thought it was a great idea so I went downstairs alone and went straight to the kitchen, nobody was there so I went in and went right to the pantry. There was enough food to feed 10,000 people! When I was about to grab the crackers someone opened the door! It was...
continued tomorrow!
Wednesday, April 11, 2012
Hello :)
Hi, I'm Sofie. This is my blog where I write stories every week. I will post one part of the story everyday. I hope you all like it! The beginning of my first story will start tomorrow! I don't know what is called yet though! you guys post comments of ideas after the story is over!
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