Last time on ______
Right when I was about to ask the new cook where Miss.Manzoni was my sister Norah got called by Mrs.Mordar and she said "your getting adopted by..."
This time on ______
"someone named Sarah Panatarii" I almost screamed I was so upset. I couldn't just let my sister be taken away by a random lady named Sarah. Norah had tears in her eyes and she screamed "Don't take me away! NO!!" I looked out the open door and through the tears in my eye I noticed that the woman looked strangely familiar. She winked and me, took Norah's hand, and got into her car. I ran up to my bed and threw my face into my pillow. I thought of how mean Mrs.Mordar was to let me and Norah get split up. I mean, Why would she do that! When I was thinking about how mean she was I fell asleep. In the morning the next day I woke up to the most terrible noise
I wanted to hear. Mrs.Mordar. She was saying something that I would never expect her to say though. She said "Your getting adopted by Sarah Panaterii so get up! At first I thought I
was dreaming but then I realized it was real! I was really getting adopted and living in a house with my sister! I ran downstairs and saw my sister dressed in a calico dress and a petty coat. She looked much better than me with my unbrushed hair and ripped clothes. I realized that I would soon have a petty coat and a calico dress on. I was so happy I didn't even notice how much Sarah Panaterii looked like the old cook Miss.Manzoni. I was so happy I ran into Sarah's arms an said "Thank you for adopting me!"
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love it so much! I can not wait!!!!!!!………..S
ReplyDeleteOh, that's great that they get to be together. Phew!
ReplyDeleteWhere do you come up with these AWESOME ideas??????????????
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Thanks everyone for commenting! It's fun to see who reads this blog!
ReplyDeleteWen are you going to post the nest part? I am thing king of making my own blog. I love them so much are you writing a book abut them? maybe you can writ a book if you are not. S
ReplyDeleteLove it Sofie!!!!!!! I think you should call it "Adventure at the Orphanage"! Except maybe that actually wouldn't work because they are leaving the orphanage...
ReplyDeleteDo you know what's going to happen next? Or do you just make it up as you go along???
I make it up as I go along. I wish I knew what was going to happen. I guess in 3 or 4 days we will know the whole entire story!
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DeleteMaybe I should make a story blog too, this seems like a fun idea! Thanks Sofie for answering my questions.
DeleteYeah! I liked the prolouge of your story the 7 chairs. Are you going to write a book review and a part of a story everyday? :D
DeleteSofia - You are such a talented writer! I'm enjoying the flow of your story!
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