Wednesday, April 18, 2012

First story seventh part

Last time on __________...

When we went inside they started telling me about everything, including why she said she was Miss.Manzoni. She said it because...

This time on ________...

She was Miss.Manzoni! She got married to a rich guy named David Panaterii and left her job as a cook. Now she lives in a big mansion with David. By now I was calmed down and I actually understood why everything happened this way. Mrs.Manzoni adopted us because she had to help Norah feel better but she had to keep us together. It all made sense! Well, everything except what Sarah just said. She said she would try to adopt ALL the kids in the orphanage! I didn't get it! How would she do it! I mean I know she had the room and the money, but how would she take care of all those kids 58! I asked her "How are you going to take care of 58 kids?" Sarah answered by saying "Well, I will take care of 8 kids, and I will have 5 nannies that each take care of 10 kids each. We would all eat dinner together though because we would still all be a family." I was so happy! all my friends wouldn't be stuck at the orphanage without me! They would live with me! In the same house too! We would all be sisters! I couldn't wait till all of them were adopted! I was really curious about when they were getting adopted and how much money it would be so I asked "When are you adopting all of them?" Her answer was "Well tomorrow We are taking 5 busses to the orphanage and adopting every single little girl there is. It will cost $90.000 to get all of them out  and 100,000 for the busses. "Wow" I said "weren't busses just tested and made in a factory in Canada?" "Yes" Sarah answered "You see David worked at a car factory and he gets the cars before they are even on sale!" Norah's mouth started to hang open in amazement. I guess she didn't even know about the busses!
       Later that afternoon I got into nice new clothes and shoes. They were so soft and warm. I never guessed that nice clothes were so comfortable! I guess a normal rich 10 year old wears makeup because thats what they put on me. Not a lot but just some blush and lipstick. I felt like the happiest girl in the world! After I was all dressed up we took the car to the town to get some new clothes for me. When we got there we went into a store with a beautiful pink dress on display in the window. Inside a lady measured me, and asked me all these questions I didn't know the answer to, like "what's your favorite style of dress?" and "Lots of lace or no lace?' I didn't know the answers to these silly questions so I looked at Sarah for help. She said "She likes Calico dresses and only a little lace." I lipped thank you to Sara and then looked back at the lady who was asking me questions. Next she said "What is your favorite color?" Now I could answer this one myself. I answered "My favorite color is royal purple." Next she ran off to find a dress and she came back with a beautiful dress. It was royal purple, it had lace cuffs and a lace hem. It was the most wonderful dress that I had ever seen. I said "It is perfect! Best dress ever!" So we bought the dress and went home.

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8 comments:

  1. Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!!! To repeat Alexa, "It all makes sense now!"

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    1. Thanks Eden! I am glad you get it. It's great that you are doing some writing on your blog! Your story sounds great!

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  2. I love that they are adopting all of the kids!!!!!!!!!!!……………..S

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    1. I am glad you like that idea. I didn't want anybody feeling bad for all the kids left at the orphanage

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  3. I loved the whole idea of adopting all of the kids!!!!!
    ~S.R.

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  4. Oh my goodness! 58 kids?

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  5. Sofia ---- I just got to read your blog. I really like you stories. I think that they really hold your attention and feel very real! –boopa

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